Groundhog Day
Written by Danny Rubin and Harold Ramis
Directed by Harold Ramis
Starring Bill Murray and Andie MacDowell
1993
Running time 101 min.
Groundhog Day is
one of my favorite film love stories, with a rare protagonist: an
unlikable one who goes through a major character arc because of the
crucible of love (and with a little help from the weather gods). Along
with being a time loop story, an alternate reality story, and a
high-concept comedy, it’s a great example of a male redemption story
which also manages to hit all the right love story beats while at the
same time completely satirizing those love story beats. It’s an
anti-chick-flick story which nonetheless charms the chicks. In fact, I’m
pretty certain that Ramis or Rubin, or both, made themselves a list of
romantic comedy tropes and set out to mock every one of them, starting
with the concept of the MAGICAL DAY — in this case, the least likely
magical day you can imagine. Who ever would associate Groundhog Day with
love? (But note that it is the closest holiday to Valentine's Day....)
ACT ONE
SEQUENCE ONE
OPENING
IMAGE: This is one of my favorite, sly opening images of all time. It’s
a shot of very fast moving clouds in a blue sky, with some sort of
carnival music underneath. Now, this is a natural image for the story,
which is about a weatherman. But I think there’s a lot more going on
with this image. Those are very active clouds. I would even say
they’re scheming. Yes, I’m from Berkeley and this may be some
overanthropomorphizing on my part (or possibly some sort of flashback) —
but I honestly think I’m on to something here. I think the filmmakers
are deliberately making the weather an antagonist — and mentor — for the
protagonist, who has some pretty severe need of character change. Call
it weather, call it the weather gods, call it fate — but think about it.
There’s no obvious human antagonist in this story. Instead, there is
some kind of supernatural force working here to effect the change in
surly protagonist Phil Connors.
And the shot to me also recalls the opening image of It’s a Wonderful Life,
to which this film obviously owes much. In IAWL, the opening scene
consists of snow falling heavily on small town Bedford Falls, with
voice-over prayers for someone named George Bailey, which drift
gradually upward until we fix on clusters of stars in a night sky. Two
of the constellations start to talk about how this is George’s critical
night — and we understand there is going to be some heavenly
intercession in whatever this George Bailey’s crisis is.
And intercession is exactly what happens with Phil in Groundhog Day, in a more subtle but very effective way.
CUT
TO: A news studio, with weatherman Phil Connors doing his shtick in
front of a blue screen (basically waving his arms around, a nice visual
depiction of the meaninglessness of his job). However, despite his
sarcasm and his obvious disdain for what he does — and disdain for his
coworkers, too — Phil has star quality (it’s Bill Murray, after all) and
he is more than providing the show that the job calls for.
HERO’S
OUTER DESIRE: Phil wants out of Pittsburg and onto a major network. One
of his first off-camera lines of dialogue is that a major network is
interested in him. Yes, have the hero STATE WHAT HE WANTS.
We
learn right away that Phil is en route to one of his most despised
shoots — up to tiny Punxsutawney to report on the annual Groundhog Day
festival (the INCITING INCIDENT — he’s sent off on a job). Going with
him are long-suffering cameraman Larry and wholesome, optimistic
producer Rita, whom we see first on camera, trying to figure out how the
blue screen works. There’s a long close up on Phil’s face as he watches
her — it looks like he thinks this woman is a moron. At least, that’s
what we would expect him to be thinking. Actually, this is his real CALL
TO ADVENTURE (so often in a love story the CALL is seeing the beloved
for the first time). And much later in the story Phil confesses to a
sleeping Rita what he was actually thinking when he looked at her — it’s
a wonderful PLANT.
So
they’re off on the road; under the credits we see shots of the big city
(relatively), Pittsburgh, then the van drives over a bridge and into
snow-dusted mountains with small towns. (The song: “I’m Your
Weatherman)." This is the first, more overt INTO THE SPECIAL WORLD
moment. Remember that bridges are overt symbols of transition and
change. Out
of the city, into a small mountain town. This kind of contrast
underscores the feeling of newness and adventure we want to experience
in an Into The Special World transition. But a second, more magical INTO
THE SPECIAL WORLD is coming...
In
the van, Phil mocks both the festival and impossibly upbeat Rita
mercilessly, but still does it with enough Bill Murray charm that we see
Rita is amused, and attracted. (Right off the bat we get the DANCE
scene — they play well together and Rita is unflapped by Phil’s volleys;
she’s able to keep his humor from descending into outright meanness.
But meanness is definitely a danger; Phil desperately needs redeeming.)
The
crew arrives on Main Street, Punxsutawney, which if you ask me looks
exactly like Bedford Falls. Rita has booked Phil into a nice B&B
while she and Larry are staying in a cheap hotel. She tells him to “Get
some sleep.”
Lights
out, and then up on the clock alarm by Phil’s bed (this clock will play
a huge role) — clicking over to 6 a.m. for the first time in the film
as “I Got You, Babe,” plays. (I have to think this is the Fates having a
laugh; they certainly have “got” Phil. But of course, it’s also a love
song … ) The whole following sequence — every comic bit, line of
dialogue, action and character in it — is the master sequence for all
the variations on it that are to come.
• Phil washes up at the sink to the obnoxious patter of the radio jockeys talking about Groundhog Day.
• Phil is scathing to a cheery overweight guest in the upstairs hall.
• Downstairs, Phil mocks the even more cheery proprietress of the B&B.
• On the street, Phil joins the townspeople heading toward Gobbler’s Knob.
• Phil pretends he has no money for the elderly panhandler on a street corner.
• Ned Ryerson, a high school non-friend of Phil’s, recognizes him and tries to sell him life insurance.
• Phil steps in an icy pothole while trying to escape from Ned.
•
Phil walks through the throngs of Groundhog Day festival-goers at the
Knob (as the band plays “The Pennsylvania Polka”) to join Rita and
Larry. Phil does the TV commentary on the groundhog festival: groundhog
“Phil” is removed from his cave, consults with town fathers, and sees
his shadow. Six more weeks of winter (FORESHADOWING).
• Phil insists on leaving town immediately.
•
On the road, the crew hits a roadblock — cars are being turned back
because of a big blizzard. (HERO LOCKED INTO THE SITUATION.)
(This
is a trope in romantic comedy — the Fates seem to intervene in the form
of the weather, forcing the hero or heroine onto a path s/he hadn’t
planned for, as we see in New in Town and Leap Year. Groundhog Day takes
this and many other romantic comedy clichés and mocks them at the same
time as it gets all the mileage it can out of the romance of the
situations — which is a big reason the story appealed equally to male
and female audiences. Note that the same slightly surreal music from the
opening shot is playing under this scene — it’s the Fates stepping in,
I’m telling you! I’d also call this the ANTAGONIST’S PLAN. It’s just
delicious that the weather has turned into Phil’s opponent. And Phil
knows it, as he rails at the roadblock cop: “I make the weather.” (Uh,
oh — if I’m not mistaken, this is DEFYING THE GODS. It’s never good when
mortals do that …)
• Back in the B&;B, Phil can’t find transportation or even a phone line out of town.
• In his room he tries to shower and is assaulted by icy water; the pipes are frozen.
• He goes to bed. (18:30)
SEQUENCE TWO
And
in the morning, Phil wakes up — to the exact same clock shot, the exact
same song, the exact same radio patter. Phil assumes the repetition is a
studio gaffe: they’ve put in yesterday’s tape by mistake. (A great
rational response to a bizarre situation.) But when he looks out the
window there’s very little snow on the ground, and people seem to be
headed toward Gobbler’s Knob in droves, just as they did yesterday.
And
here’s the second, more subtle, but real CROSSING THE THRESHOLD/INTO
THE SPECIAL WORLD: when Phil wakes up in the morning to a replaying of
the day he just spent. The filmmakers cue this moment with the shot of
the clock alarm clicking over to 6 a.m., while “I Got You, Babe” plays
on the radio. It’s a big visual that will repeat and repeat and repeat.
The numbers on the clock are like a door, and they usher Phil into the
real Special World: a time loop where every day is Groundhog Day and
there’s no escaping Punxsutawney, PA.
Out
in the hallway he runs into the same portly guest, who asks him the
same cheery questions. Phil starts to get uneasy then attacks the guest,
demanding to know what’s going on.
In the breakfast room, a dazed Phil is nicer to the proprietress just from shock.
He
is increasingly distressed as he goes to Gobbler’s Knob (meeting Ned
again, stepping in the icy pothole) and finds the festivities occurring
in the same order. His newscast is considerably less sarcastic, and Rita
wonders.
By
now sure that the blizzard is coming and he’s trapped, Phil doesn’t
leave in the van with Larry and Rita. At the B&B he again phones
a travel agent and tries to get out of town some other way; when the
travel agent suggests he try again tomorrow, Phil rails, “What if there is no tomorrow? There wasn’t today.” A nice bit of comic dialogue that also clearly states Phil’s FEAR. (SPELL IT OUT.)
Before he goes to sleep he breaks a pencil and sets it on the bed table. (TESTING THE RULES.) (25:44)
Phil wakes for the third time to the same song, the same radio banter. The pencil is intact, reconstituted.
Phil
speeds through the same sequence of events, then at Gobbler’s Knob
tells Rita he’s not going to do the show; he’s already done it twice
already, and something is terribly wrong. Rita insists he do the show,
they’ll talk after. (27:30)
At the diner, Phil tells Rita “I’m reliving the day over and over. I need help.”
Rita
thinks he needs a doctor. (So this is the minor, initial PLAN.) Note
the stopped clocks on the wall behind Phil, and the bumper sticker that
says “The Spirit” behind Rita. In fact, the Tip Top café logo outside on
the building is a clock — with no hands.
Rita
and Larry take Phil to a doctor. The CAT scan is clean; the doctor
suggests a shrink. Phil visits a very young psychologist who has no idea
what to do with his problem but suggests they meet again tomorrow.
Phil
gets drunk in a bowling alley with two locals. He asks them: “What if
you woke up in the same place every day and every day was just the same
and there was nothing you could do about it?” The men seem to feel
that’s life, in a nutshell. (THEME.) As they leave the bar, the two men
are way too drunk to drive, so Phil gets into the driver’s seat of the
car and then suddenly takes off, asking, “What if there were no
consequences?” One of the drunks answers, “We could do whatever we
wanted.” And Phil says, “Exactly.” (PLAN). He races through the town,
picking up a police tail, drives on the railroad tracks, barely missing a
train, and crashes into a giant groundhog cutout in a parking lot. The
sequence ends with the jail cell door closing on Phil … (35 min).
ACT ONE CLIMAX (A comic car chase, crash, SETPIECE.)
… and Phil wakes up in the morning in the B&B bed, to the same clock, the same song.
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